Damn, this kind of creative writing gets me all the time. Great job on the newest episode!
Keep 'em coming, I'm quite a fan now. :)
Damn, this kind of creative writing gets me all the time. Great job on the newest episode!
Keep 'em coming, I'm quite a fan now. :)
Why thank you! Already working on the next episode, and it'll be out in about one month.
Let's see...
Not much... Only one thing, that really devastated me... the humor. It was so pale, and the whole stuff seemed pretty slow and dull because of it. You just have to improve...
This was slim guys... (Next time don't forget the music... It can grade up your work)
Lazarus-omin
Exp. Points: 40 / 50
Sign-up Date: 4/16/06
Another noob!
Thanks for the review.
Hey there! I'm making games (~as a hobbyist developer), music and various writings.
Age 37, Male
Musician
University of Debrecen
Among six strings, HU
Joined on 4/16/06